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From: Maureen Craddock <mcrad@span.ref.com>
To: Louise Steinfeld <louise24@mail.net>
Date: Monday, May 5, 2003
Subject: Long time no see


I was wondering if you're still at your old
address, or if you've moved.

I wanted to send you some interesting
material that I received from Paula in
Denver. It might help you with your thesis
if you still haven't handed it in.

I sent the parcel to your old address about a
week ago and it I haven't heard anything since
then, so I'm assuming it arrived all right.

Let me know if you received it, will you?

By the way, did you tell your former room-mate
about the job opportunity in New Jersey?

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Maureen Craddock
070-6929-9945
From: Louise Steinfeld <louise24@mail.net>
To: Maureen Craddock <mcrad@span.ref.com>
Date: Tuesday, May 6, 2003
Subject: Re: Long time no see


On Monday, May 5 Maureen Craddock wrote:

>I was wondering if you're still at your old
>address, or if you've moved.

I'm still at my old office.

>I wanted to send you some interesting
>material that I received from Paula in
>Denver. It might help you with your thesis
>if you still haven't handed it in.

Thank you so much. I haven't handed it in yet,
and it will be a great help.

>I sent the parcel to your old address about a
>week ago and it I haven't heard anything since
>then, so I'm assuming it arrived all right.

Yes, I received it yesterday.

>By the way, did you tell your former room-mate
>about the job opportunity in New Jersey?

Yes. She's very interested. She asked me to thank
you for the information.

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Louise

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