The reason why the first sentences of each pair sound unnatural is that in English, we tend to put new information toward the end of the sentence, after the main verb, in order to emphasize it. We usually put the old information (the information that the listener already knows about or expects to hear about) in the first part of the sentence.
For example, in the sentences in below (a) and (b), the old information is italics and the new information is in bold type.
In a self-introduction:
The italicized words are old information in the sense that these are the usual topics found in a self-introduction. The information in bold type is new information that the listener doesn't yet know and can't predict.
The sentences in (i) and (ii) below describe the same basic facts as those in above, but the information appears in a different order. These sentences are grammatical but they would sound very unnatural in a self-introduction.
Here, my name, where I am from and where I live are emphasized as new information, while Vicky, the U.S. and Japan are old information. It's hard to imagine a context in which someone would use these sentence. Probably, we would only use them to correct someone's mistakes: 'Vicky is my name, not my hometown, and the U.S. is where I am from, not where I plan to study.'
(Notice that in Japanese, the old information is often optional and can be ommitted. iڳOjBLB)
Many times, Japanese students write English sentences which are grammatical but which sound strange because the old information and new information are not where we expect them to be. In the sentence in (1) above, for example, the focus is on a big cockroach, so it is better to put this phrase after the main verb. Likewise, in (4), the writer ouuting the focus on the fact that a takoyaki shop exists, so a takoyaki shop should come after the main verb. Using there is is a good way to do this.
There is also used in negative sentences when we want to talk about the fact that something does not exist, as in the following examples.
There's a useful reference book for helping you to understand the differences between the English and the Japanese ways of expressing ideas in sentences: Situation vs. Person Focus; {ԐҭpԐ by John Hinds, published by Эo.
| Back to Index of Mistakes | Back to Victoria Muehleisen's Home Page | E-Mail to Vicky |